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Really cool song! I liked this quite a bit. The intro was quite nice, i enjoyed it a lot. I liked how you brought in that melody that you hear at .23. At 1:17 I liked the new piano sound you brought in, but it was a bit muffled, it had a lot of potential right there, but didn't reach it. At 2:50 when you brought it back, I really enjoyed it without the bass with it as was there earlier. Nice work!

Cerzak responds:

Yeah, man! Thanks for the tips on how this song couldve been improved. I will admit that the piano and bass part wasnt the best idea, i just wanted some percussion or something, and wanted to bring it back again later in the song, thanks for the review mate!

Not bad, I especially liked the guitar part at the beginning of song. The intro was fit really well. At 2:02, it was a bit too much adding that synth in, it didn't fit as well as it should have. Pretty good song.

NGKFlower responds:

Thanks. I'll work on my progress a bit more.
=)

Nice song, it's got some nice progression to it. The lead sounds nice and clear, just how you want it in a song like this.

Euphy responds:

Thank you!! :)

Nice, it loops almost perfectly.

TastyTeo responds:

Almost? Maybe your computer is slow :P

Not bad at all, I especially liked the part at 1:26. It had a nice bass to it, but I felt the lead was a little overpowered by the bass. The drums were pretty good especially the kick. The one thing there I felt that could be really improved was the snare, it didn't sound like it fit quite right with the track. But all in all, I thoroughly enjoyed listening!

wandschrank responds:

I'm glad you like the song! Too bad you don't like the snare, I think it sounds very trashy, at least that's what I've aimed for. The mixing is just the way I wanted it to be, this song shouldn't sound like a modern, clinically clean edm song, but more gritty, noisy, dirty, distorted. I think you get the idea. :)Thanks for your review!

I like the main song, but, there was no real chorus other than drums, which aren't all that filling. Also the intro was dragged out too much by like twenty seconds. I would definitely recommend adding more background, and this could be very good.

namirhassan responds:

Thanks for the thoughtful review my friend.

It was not bad at all for an early attempt I can see that you have a vision of what you want the song to sound like, but its hard to get it there. I think the song itself was a good idea but it didn't flow together as you would want. Also I heard some instruments overpower others, and make it a bit muddled. So you definitely want to try experimenting and try to find what instrument needs to be what volume. But overall it was pretty good song. Keep at it!

Exilious responds:

Thanks! Yeah, the matter of the volume of the instruments was kinda solved before seeing as how that it was clear and present how most of the drum beats were too loud. When making the song I noticed it, and tried to lower them and turn up the volume of the main arp, but then it sounded too loud. I was really conflicted with it and every time I make a song I can never decide what volume to put everything at. But I'm working at it! Thanks for the review my friend! :D

Tags: terrible, Rofl

Step responds:

Hahaha yup. This is the first song i ever made. What do you expect! :p

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